Thursday, December 29, 2011
Alli's CBR-III Review #43 - It Feels So Good When I Stop
"It Feels So Good When I Stop" is the story of a nameless protagonist who flees his brand new wife and ends up on Cape Cod in his sister's vacated home. His sister is going through a divorce and so both her and her husband have left the home. Her soon to be Ex-husband keeps leaving his 18 month old son with our hero and makes him keep it a secret from his sister. Also our hero meets a woman from the neighbourhood who seems down and out, and they forge a relationship.
The story jumps back and forth from the past to the present, the hero's rocky relationship with the wife/girlfiend he left is explored. The writing is rather good, but the ending came too soon with not nearly enough resolution to the plots that are contained throughout. Had the story came to a better conclusion I would have been much more satisfied. As it is, I was left with the feeling that this was a rather pointless tale.